Hoya - A Short Story.
Most film students will struggle in the areas of writing a script. Visualization and writing is two different areas. When your script is lengthy, epic ( grander than Lord of the Rings), they will run unto a huge problem when they step unto production, resulting into a messy product.
Most of the time - i will advise them to keep it minimal, simplistic, but bear in mind simplicity takes alot.
Here's an example - keep your story short, simple and engaging. Secondly - audience is intelligent. Never - ever under-estimate them.
EXT/Day
One Minister visited an tribal village.
As what Minister will do - he will give bullshit speech.
After he finished with his usual bullshits - the villagers gave a rousing cry
" Hoya - Hoya"
Encouraged with this, Minister said " a new road to your village"
"HOYA-HOYA"
Tears running down minister's cheeks, he ended his speech with " we come to you as Equals - we are brothers!!"
Long mighty cry of " HOYA" followed.
cut to
Minister went to a tour, saw an impressive breeds of cattle.
He said " wow - can i inspect them closer?"
village chief said "be careful not to step in the hoya"
Most of the time - i will advise them to keep it minimal, simplistic, but bear in mind simplicity takes alot.
Here's an example - keep your story short, simple and engaging. Secondly - audience is intelligent. Never - ever under-estimate them.
EXT/Day
One Minister visited an tribal village.
As what Minister will do - he will give bullshit speech.
After he finished with his usual bullshits - the villagers gave a rousing cry
" Hoya - Hoya"
Encouraged with this, Minister said " a new road to your village"
"HOYA-HOYA"
Tears running down minister's cheeks, he ended his speech with " we come to you as Equals - we are brothers!!"
Long mighty cry of " HOYA" followed.
cut to
Minister went to a tour, saw an impressive breeds of cattle.
He said " wow - can i inspect them closer?"
village chief said "be careful not to step in the hoya"
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